模板是「骨架」不是「答案」。真正得分的是你填进去的具体证据和例子。下面给的是结构占位,实战替换 [ ] 内容即可。
The reading passage argues that [阅读总立场]. However, the lecture challenges / contradicts this view by pointing out that [讲座总反驳].
First, the reading claims that [阅读点1]. Yet the professor argues that [讲座如何反驳点1 + 具体证据].
Second, while the passage suggests [阅读点2], the lecture counters that [讲座反驳点2].
Finally, the reading attributes [现象] to [阅读点3], but the speaker demonstrates that [讲座反驳点3].
In sum, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading’s three major claims.
填空优先级:讲座证据 > 阅读要点 > 连接词。时间不够时,三段主体各写清「阅读说 X,讲座说非 X(因为 Y)」即可拿 4 分。
I’d have to side with [Kelly / the professor / a different view] — I believe [你的核心立场].
The main reason is that [理由]. For instance, [具体例子:个人/数据/常识场景], which shows that [例子支撑的结论].
Admittedly, [反方合理之处], but [为什么你的立场仍成立].
Unlike [同学名], who emphasized [同学观点], I’d stress [你的差异化角度].
填空优先级:立场句 > 例子 > 呼应同学。10 分钟写满 ~150 词就停,别为凑字数加废话。
| 功能 | 综合写作常用 | 学术讨论常用 |
|---|---|---|
| 反驳 | contradict, challenge, undermine, cast doubt on | however, that said, I disagree because |
| 递进 | furthermore, in addition | beyond that, more importantly |
| 因果 | this is because, as a result | that’s why, which leads to |
| 举例 | for example, specifically | a good case is, take … as an example |
| 让步 | admittedly, it is true that | to be fair, I see why some think |
别每次都用
However。轮换上面这些,语言分立刻上去。更多高分表达见sentence-bank.md。